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English Computer Reading |
February 21, 2024...and the goodness continues in Arizona! |
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Homeroom
84-Eighth Grade |
Return to Mr. Cantine's Home Page | 7 Seventh Grade Computer 7 |
Alex Cantine, do you remember when I took this picture?
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Click on the links below for more examples. Some are really good reads! | |||
Some excellent examples of
descriptive writings from 2012:
(used only with permission...unedited by teacher) |
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Tera Hanson "Hotel Creeper" |
Rachelle Gabriel "Rip Cord" |
Clay Brakke "Truck Hunt" |
Katie Cannedy "Crash" |
Josh Fonder "My Bloody Birthday" |
Heidi Bergquist "Thrill of Zip Lining" |
Anonymous "Swim Team" |
Courtney Lusk "Near Death" |
Shalyn Przybycien "That's Our Car" |
Rebekah
Tuchscherer "The Ride of a Lifetime" |
Mikayla Street "What Can Happen at a Red Light" |
Kala Loehrer "First Day in Fifth Grade" |
Ellie Webb "Riding the Wave" |
Brianna Schreurs "A Terrible Track Meet" |
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<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< To the left...to the left... My 2008 fourth quarter literature class-- graduates of MHS in 2012-- an unusual group filled with FREAKS & GEEKS! |
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Some older examples of
descriptive writings 2008:
(used only with permission...unedited by teacher) |
Adam Cloos "Andy and the Snowpile" |
Corley Berkner "State 4-H Rodeo" |
Anonymous " Jake" |
Katie
Boone "Knee Injury" |
Jalen Snaza "5:15" |
Seth
Phillips "Hollywood Tower of Terror" |
Ryan Patnoe "My Deer Hunting Adventure" |
Brock Gomer "My Fishing Trip to Canada" |
Andy Behrens "Friends" |
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If you have an opinion on one of the writings above, drop
me a line at
miamidolphinlover@hotmail.com and I will share it with the student.
Thank you for reading! Note: The main goal of the descriptive writings was to provide a "video" inside the reader's mind. Punctuation, spelling, grammar, and more was graded, but to a lesser extent than the main goal. |